Awesome! totally.

Ok, I only saw the movie once and I haven't seen any of the series in many, many years-but I do remember the nice great feel of watching of episode when I read the story.

Dang, you had some "high tech" words in there as well XD lol it felt like you were in the head of someone who knew stuff about the world of startreck.

PICARD! My favorite captain!

;_; it was so sad what happened, that girl Judy dying and leaving the man she loved. And poor Ron-you can't blame the guy. He was wrong to blame Data but he was incredibly hurt, not a bad guy at all. T_T And I nearly cried for Data, that was heartbreaking and sad what happened to him and what he had to go through. I am glad he will be alright though.

Good story for your first ST fic! It was really good!