Y'all did good! Loved the mix of Bella's boy toys! :)

Sorry about the divorce. Stay strong. :)

Awww the best stories always end at the best part! Darn! Great story too bad it ended :(

Good story so far. :)

She's a bigger person than I am. I don't think I could get over it, knowing he knew the whole time that she was being two-timed.

i love it!1 maybe a littlem lemon is missing

He was lucky I didn't cause him bodily harm or tell everyone about his itty bitty teeny weenie.

AGH! This story was soooo good! It had me on the edge of my seat the entire time! I liked how you added Jasper and Emmett into the mix like that. And then Edward was soooo sweet! He was perfectly written! I loved it sooo much! It's 7 in the morning and I could not go to bed until I finished this. AHH! SO GOOD! I can't wait to read your other stories! :)

Gooood, I lived this!

This was really good. Almost perfect.

Adorable! And can I please have you two as my parents. I'm a resilient kid, I can handle divorce. I'll spend weekends with jackbauer

Also l caught a typo "your shoulder" and um another one that I forgot in this chapter because I was reading too fast; too many writers must get a little crazy I guess lol

Love your work!

GO Bella!

Sweet story! :)

so sweet ! I loved it

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww he was soo cute! :)

:) MD x