Her father killed her... HE KILLED HER!

THE AWFUL CRUEL MAN!

you should make a squel to this saying how the family feels after she dies.

STUPID FATHER!

I hope she still has the ring...

great story! I hope that you can update soon and make it into more than a one shot.

Your story was a lot longer then mine T_T... I was sorta wondering what you didn't put chapter '22' and '23' in two separate... CHAPTERS! That's the word I was looking for.

Oh by the was I noticed a spelling error in here-

'I go here all most every chance I get.' (couldn't italicizes it )

shouldn't that be: I go here almost every chance I get?

I don't think after the applause you got in class you need me to tell you your story was amazing!

Capachu! (or what ever you were telling Andrew, lol) ;D

Sofia-Puffergirl

Canon like sequence of events. Did she die at the end? Poor Patty. I like how she told Mr. Bergan off like that but what did that mean? LoL