You are screwing with the canon and it is glorious. Moreover it's properties I'm halfway familiar with. :-)

I love your commitment to realism. Searching out the probable locations of Tenchi and Kenichii's pads? That's dedication.

[munching popcorn intensifies]

This just went from passable fiction to excellent fiction.

any chance of continuing this? it would be well worth it from my point of view, any chance of him going to a western manga ?

THAT T-SHIRT WAS mine.

Dude, you talk like Yoda

Really like the story. A friend put me onto it and it was entirely worth the read. Hope you continue this in the future. Probably the best self-insert i've ever read.

Keep up the writing.

I like it. A self-insert with a sense of reality, if such a thing is possible.

are you dead... if so that story ended way fast... guess you off to Hild to get a job there?

ahh team fortress 2 i thought i knew that quote

you need sleep badly...i mean really a deal with the devil... thats so bad they made a saying out of it

home:)
and yah got Ryouga... i hope yah can take him back:(

... the cat... the talking cat sure but still
yah had Mars with her fire and Usagi with the healing and you get the cat:(
then again how much can you take with you... wouldnt be good to take Mars and she loses a finger or hand:(

... its a good thing yah grabbed that knife
and theres another thought, you are getting little things from each universe you visit... too bad yah got only the basic nanites from Washu... can she teleport the things.. no she cannot:(

you sneak up... try to fire... Safety is on... Face fault i do
and the killing sounds morbid... i think the word is... if/when you get some shut eye yah gonna be a tad messed up:(
DEATH? yah shot him... oddly this sounds more bad then the scouts basically atomizing him... for one thing this seems quicker