|Reviews for Three Generations|
| Scorn's Child 4/22/11 . chapter 5
WHY! WHY MUST MENDANBAR DIE! HE WAS MY FAVORITE CHARACTER! *Sobs*
| Ava Phoenixia 12/22/10 . chapter 3
I'm glad you decided to flesh out your story more, as before it was little more than a plot skeleton. However, you need to proofread this. I'd offer, but I haven't got quite enough stories yet.
On a side note: you don't need to put a dash before every paragraph.