wow who would think she was married to Soloman it was so cute that they were playing chase...wish they Soloman weren't there...it was weird...wish Hagi an Saya couldn't been together without Soloman..o well it was one of the best fics I've read...one of my favs for sure...everytime I read one of yr storys I always like it.

keep writting and don't let anyone tell u other wise.

I freaking love you forever! *dies*

This story was so sweet. And the way it's written is amazing. I loved the whole thing. Awesome job! :D

Aww, it was so sweet, cute and amazing in the beginning. Then the ending caught me totally off guard. But I still loved it!

Love the emotions and detail Bee, when did you become such a good writer? And when did people stop reading such good fanfics like this? -shakes head-

I enjoyed this very much :) you have certianly grown as a writer

*screaming love* Oh my god, that was awesome! I loved everything about it!