Good i Was waiting for Like this

Nice. Very much in character, as well a displaying the contrasting nature of ME/SW styles of tech/powers. I like how you've drawn attention to how the force and biotics interact and fundamentally function differently.

First x-over I've read and it's really caught onto me, hope to see an update again in the near future

Dude this story is fucking awesome. Revan could just crush shepherd he would only amuse him for a moment lol. I hope you come back to this story one day

interesting... I could honestly care less for Mass Effect, but I love Revan kicking ass and the shock (and mild horror) Shepard is feeling while watching the one-man-army ;)

and even Revan being humbled by his mistake was good. it shows while super powerful and smart, he is still human... well, mostly human ;)

Hoping against hope, I would truly love for you to continue. :)

Please UPDATE!

Really enjoyed this. I read it all the way though and I liked what you did with Revan, although I don't agree about his feelings towards Bastilla. Keep it up :)

Revan doesn't need to be saved. I would hope that Shepard is the one who ends up educated on the cold necessities of life. In war we kill bar none

you need to update this. also noticed you made a continuity error. in this chapter, you Kaiden died on Virmire, in a previous chapter, you said it was Ashley. of course, everyone of the five times i played through ME1 i let Kaiden die, even when i wasn't going for a romance with Ashley, so i'm not exactly complaining about the change, lol.

I am really disappointed this never got finished. It's a dang good story. One of the best I've read. So you should pick it up again and finish the dang thing.

I just read this, it's been over a year since your last post, but I hope that the story hasn't died for you...this is by far the best fan fiction I have ever read...and I sincerely hope you will continue to tell this story

I'm pretty sure Revan wouldint leave without his gear.

Wouldn't describe him as arrogant, considering Force Masters are capable of... exterminating entire WORLDS. He's just a bit behind as far as rules go.

Nifty story though :)

Revan leaving all his gear behind? Unlikely, unless the force told him that he'd get it back.

Very interesting start, I look forward to reading more :)