|Reviews for Death Comes Quickly|
| PunkEmoChick 5/24/11 . chapter 1
Interesting. i like it! i think it was good. :)
| OH MY 10/29/10 . chapter 1
Keep trying. It's a bit drab when all your paragraphs begin with dialogue and run into description that isn't as accurate as someone would want to read. Also you spelled "rational" wrong in your summary. :D Edit a bit more and you'll be sure to get it right!