This is absolutely breathtaking. It made my heart snap into two. I love the way you've written it, it's just so believable.I normally hate reading angsty stuff, but this an exception. I'm going to end this review and grab a box of Kleenex now.

Oh my gosh, I was sobbing all the way through! So so beautiful and touching... Powerful, amazing... Good job! *watery smile* :)

Icey

This is so beautiful, you make Kai's 'illness' very believable, the characters were very well-written; as were the scenes and moods.

I cried SO much after reading this-and I don't get emotional often T_T

It reminds me so much of my nan who has dimentsia, she is exactly like Kai is in this story and it just brought it all back to me, made me remember that there is still so much I can do for her.

This really did touch a personal note for me and it's nice to know that someone understands-whether it was intentional or not, it felt so real.

Bravo!

This is the first actual fanfic that I've ever read that didn't have a happy ending. From the beginning to the end, you had me at tears, and I'm still crying as I am writing this. You are an amazing writer for writing a masterpiece like this, and I am not just saying that. This story touched my heart so deep that when I read the words that Kai and Takao died and the painting that was left behind, I actually broke down and cried, which I don't normally do. How you made Tyson put so much love and devotion onto someone that was too far from reach, touched me so deep. I am going to recommend this to everyone that loves Beyblade and that loves this pairing. I am not only adding this to my favorites nor am I adding you to my favorite author, I going to keep in mind that everytime I see you name, Triste, I'm not going to feel 'sad'. I'm going to feel that pure devotion that you put in these kind of fanfics. I hope to see something familiar like this in the futur, I felt a bit uplifting after reading this and I hope to continue reading the same style over and over. I love your other stories, I really do. They are funny and heartwarming, all of them, yet I say that this one takes the cake. You gave me a different view on Beyblade and you gave me a different view on Kai and Takao. I bid you good luck to the other fanfics that you plan to write, for whenever I feel like reading something out of the ordinary, I'll come to you.

A side note...

I read the three Naruto fanfics that you wrote with Itachi and Naruto. And I will tell you that I loved them very much that I actually printed them, however the titles I forgot to write down of to print. I enjoyed those fanfics very much. I'm not implying that you should continue them, I'm just saying that I read your earlier works on a different site and that you were on my watch list for a while until my mother took away my computer for a year, making me forget your fanfics. When I got my computer back, all my saved websites and files were gone and I had forgotten about you. Well, not anymore. Hopefully I'm not sounding like some weird stalker or anything, but I'm just praising you like I do to some of the great writers that I send these reviews to. I don't send many reviews, I only read then I favorite it. You and a few others are a different story. I will cherish you and the few others that write as beautifully as you.

Now I am finished my review/feedback. I hope you have the time to read it. Now I'm sure that I won't forget about you ever again.

This was such a sad yet incredibly well-written story. Loved it.

I loved everything about this; the characterization was perfect, and it was written beautifully too. I just so happened to have a sad song on while reading this, so I was bawling I'd say.. 3/4 of it?

Amazing. You're a very talented writer.

this...had me on the verge of tears...really.. its beautiful..

Well, that was just... great. I haven't read something so well writtenand entertaining in a while. It's especially hard to find one of beyblade, that is. Well, now didn't that just sound a little stupid. So, anyways, I'll finish by saying that it was great and it keo me entertained for as long as it lasted.

*CRIES* OMG! THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL BUT SAD... OMG! I loved this!

That was one of the saddest things I've ever read in my whole life! One reason, it's Kai and Tyson! :'( and two, it was just so sad, oh my God it was so sad! I got all teary eyed. I really loved reading this story. It was so well written and so heartbreaking. Well done! I can't wait to read more stories by you! XD

Amber

This story completely broke my heart! It was so depressing, especially at the end! When Ray went to meet them... I almost cried. It was beautiful and emotional. I agree that Tyson is a very devoted guy. I love him. Thanks for writing such a wonderful story of love. This was a perfect tribute to Kai and Tyson(Takao),as well as other couples. That's how true love should be. Keep up the good work!

I've read this before...