Really good :) I enjoyed it.

Wow. You did an amazing job with this - the narration is perfect, exactly what I'd expect from a slightly older and more mature Juno, and you nailed the strange chemistry between her and Mark. Acknowledging the deleted scene where Juno sees Mark in a video store was a good move, and the added touch of Juno tweaking her memory of what movie he was holding according to mood was one of my favorite parts of the story!

Anyway, I'm just really impressed with this - kudos to you, and thanks for sharing!

Interesting, fairly deep,

You really have a talent for writing

I really liked this story. Great way to tie up the Mark and Juno thing :)

Juno is my favorite movie of all time and I think you've done it justice with this :)

10/10

Ava

xoxo

this is so well written!

i loved it so much :)

dude, this legit felt like something Juno could have narrated

excellent job :)

I thought this was really really great. A very vivid description of Juno's life and framed really well with the "happy as I can be" at both ends. Very well-done!

Good stuff. Juno/Mark, I'd ship it. Their relationship was the best part about Juno (so intriguing), helped along by the great chemistry between Ellen/Jason.

Always wondered what would happen if they ever met again down the road, I really enjoyed this fic.

I liked how you wrote it and enjoyed the references to the actual script (Maker's Mark & Most Fruitful Yuki were good touches), I didn't enjoy the use of Leah quotes all that much. BTW, it's Phuket not Phucket.

But those are minor flaws, all in all, a good story.

My favorite part was their "Happy as can be" response to the same question. Soulmates indeed.

Is this a one-shot or a continuing piece?