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| Reviews for Harry Potter and a New Story |
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   luminousnox 9/23/12 . chapter 6It basically the same story, but you've made Bella exactly like Hermione.. |
| dream lighting 6/1/12 . chapter 18 Not bad confused the Charlie Fred and George but no Ron or ginny unique bunt confusing |
| kristenrobert 1/9/12 . chapter 18 cool chapter love it |
| Harryfan 1/9/12 . chapter 18 mind blowing story lol |
| SinuousFun-Keeper of Innocence 8/4/11 . chapter 3 You wrote Hermione instead of Bella when Jay told her to eat. |
| SinuousFun-Keeper of Innocence 8/4/11 . chapter 1 You wrote Ron somewhere around the lower middle. |
| Jaudgicc 2/21/11 . chapter 1 To answer teamrosalie's qustion jay is a gay fag that th aurthur put in a threesome with Harry and hermione and is maried to both |
| H 2/21/11 . chapter 1 For starters, I couldn't 3even finish this it sucks and I was bored come up with better ideas why doncha |
| Brogalini Tangerini 1/1/11 . chapter 1 why did Bella say Ron when she was talking to Jay in the carriage or is it a simple mistake? and where is Ron in this story? It is a good story though |
| ariana kaylani 10/31/10 . chapter 3 wheres the weaslys? |
| FallenHope 8/22/10 . chapter 6 I feel the need to mention this about your story,as i have read it I have noticed that you have just had 'Jay' take over Rons place in the story and Bella has taken Hermione's role compleatly, what with the Elf rights and many of the things we know she say in the real thing, I mean you story is good and well written but not very imaginative. |
| Fred 8/21/10 . chapter 17 cool story |
| shane 8/21/10 . chapter 17 nice story update soon |
| Jennifer 8/21/10 . chapter 16 love your story |
| mathew 8/21/10 . chapter 16 awesome story love it espicially the pairing harry and bella |
