 xxFireWarriorxx 3/6/10 . chapter 1WHOA! This was... different. XD But not in a bad way, so no worries. :) This is my first time reading something like this... I've read lemon before, and I've read yaoi (neither of which are exactly my cup of tea ;), but not yaoi lemon. But you're such a great author so if anyone can get me to read this style, it'd be you. :D
Anyways, I've to say, it was really fantastically written. You always get the characters spot on, and though it was short, it was perfect. If it were dragged on any longer then I feel like it'd be cumbersome.
Anyways, needless to say, great job. :) |