Nice little story.

"Never speak that way again, to Bail or anyone else." The beast shrank at her disapproval, and Anakin felt its power drain from him, leaving him shaken, horrified at what he had done.

Padme likes being assertive of him. :P

Oh. My. God. :) PERFECT!

Sorry, that was just my immediate, insinctual reaction when I finished the story. Thought you should know.

Anyway, just let me say that this is one of the better stories I've read. Your characterizations, descriptions of the characters, and all their interactions are so, so perfect and completely IC that I could practically see this happening in my head, as if it were in one of the movies. Amazing!

I really liked the plot and how it was always moving. There was never a dull moment in the whole thing, and I admit I was so drawn into the story I read the whole thing through in one sitting. It took my about two/three hours, but it was completely worth it! I was also intrigued by the character development- like how Anakin grows up a little bit through the story, and Padme discovers a little more about herself and what she wants (vs what a queen would want), etc. It was all just fantastic!

And the last thing- LOVED the ending. So perfect, and Obi's reaction was completely IC and just priceless. It made me laugh so hard: Jar Jar's 'conquest' of Bant, and Obi-Wan. LOL. :D

All in all, really great story! I can't believe you've gotten so few reviews (only 29 so far!) for such a great fic. Please write more, I truly enjoyed your writing.

-Gwin (PS-Sorry about the really wordy and lengthy review. I tend to babble when I'm excited! :D)

Awesome. I loved this one! I'm going to read the rest now!

That was absolutely wonderful - one of the best fics I've ever read. All the relationships were just done so, so well - I don't normally like Anakin/Padme fics, but I really liked the way you portrayed the pairing. Obi-Wan and Bail, though it's an unusual pairing, I found worked incredibly well here, and as for Obi and Ani...so sweet! Obi's my favourite character, and he's just perfect in this!

Hm. Need to stop gushing now. _ Oh, by the way, I love the way you personify (sp?) the darkness within Anakin as 'the beast' - brilliant.

OMG... this is the best Starwars fic I have ever read so far..very well-written and so emotional ...Excellent job! I also read your other fic in M_A and just love it Please keep up the great works!

Wow...Wow...Uh...Wow.

That was by far the best fic. I've ever read. (Sorry redroseknight)If you write more Anakin and Padme fics (Which I STRONGLY STRONGLY suggest please email me! ()

Thanks

J.

poor obi-wan having to hear bant talk 'bout jar jar,lol

Yeah, I was right about the Bail thing! That's the end? I know this might be pullin' an Obi here, but Noooooooooooooooo! lol This was really great! Excellent story...but don't take my word on it. Read the other reviews. :)

Excellent story. I think you need to right more Anakin/Obi-Wan stories.

_ Great chapter!

kool _

Maybe Bail...for Obi's sake.

You probably don't even realize how well you write the dark Anakin scenes. They're really amazing...flashes of pure innocense, mixed with flashes of evil...excellent job. Really. :) You totally deserve more than 20 reviews for this.

Im back! _ great chapter get the next one up soon!

Ahhhhh! That was a great moment with Ani and Bail! Awesome job! :)