yah..yu should make more chapters this is awsome!

aw... poor Ienzo, something is after him... well, i can see why something would go after him, he is SO ADORABLE! i saw his picture and i died instantly. :D

i loved it! *adds to favorite*

A bit short but i would like to see what happens next.

Aww!

I wonder what monster is dat... o-o *got curious*

Cool. I love how you noted for the fist time I've seen that Ienzo was a child genius. Why does almost every yaoi fangirl think:

Lexaeus is dumb

Zexion is emo

Xaldin does not deserve any sort of happiness beacuse HE'S NOT BISHONEN rather than HE MESSED UP LOVE which is a bigger no-no than that. They probabbly support that because as we all know to them "Het is Ew". I respect het fangirls. Yaoi and het fangirls I can respect. But I hate people who are ironically straight yet think the best thing in the world is to cause a paradox by yaoiing Goku and Vegeta with no disregard for anything like Trunks's existance, how Goten and Gohan would live knowing exactly what the F his dad did, and how exactly all of fandom would survive with no het. Yaoi's okay. But no het means the end of all survival. EAT IT STUPID FANGIRLS! *brings out teh fulaimtowah* YOU DON'T DESERVE THE GRACE AND DIGNITY OF SHOOP DA WHOOP.