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Jasmine Indigo Sappihhra 12/10/11 . chapter 11
A year? Really? Please update...please?

May your head always be flowing with ideas

Jasmine Indigo Sappihhra
Nightshade's sydneylover150 8/13/11 . chapter 11
The hallows and a few horcruxes? Good story, I started crying in chapter 3.
nobody 1/16/11 . chapter 4
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Oakleaf 12/22/10 . chapter 11
I pick Hallows. And good story.
Angelsrm 8/21/10 . chapter 11
Well if you do the Hallows, then Harry has to live because he will be the master of death and all that junk, but he doesn't live... I say it should have been the same with the Hoarcrux because if Voldy killed him, then I think the cancer should be gone, but again he does die and so I don't really care, but I do know that I like the Hallows better, I always thought the Hoarcrux's were just a big waste of time!
silvermoonfae 8/9/10 . chapter 11
Really interesting fic . The first of it's kind I have read anyway. Well done and can't wait for the next chapter
TheNerdHerd 7/20/10 . chapter 11
Hail Nah! You did not work on your chapter and never email me! *huffs and puffs* I'm mad at you now.
supergirl3684 7/19/10 . chapter 11
that was great!
Reviewer 7/19/10 . chapter 11
It's good. I have a soft spot for Harry/Severus family stories and this one has an interesting concept. I also like tha fact that it's Harry/Hermione because thats my pairing of choice.

The only things that really bugged me a bit was that you gave Fleur a weird combination of Krum's accent and some weird made up one. I know you said that you couldn't do her accent and I'm just saying taht so far its the one thing that I've really noticed as being off grammar and spelling wise. The french accent is pretty simple the "th" sound turns into a "z" and the French "h" is usually silent so they don't pronounce them when speaking english.
1misspotter 7/16/10 . chapter 8
the song was kinda funny
1misspotter 7/16/10 . chapter 5
sssso sad two deaths at once
1misspotter 7/15/10 . chapter 3
ok ok whinny wa wa wats your problem

but the story is good
IchigoRenji 7/6/10 . chapter 10
I love this story, its way different from what I'm used to reading. I really have enjoyed it so far, keep up the great work
David boreanaz's wife247 6/13/10 . chapter 10
oh more please
David boreanaz's wife247 6/13/10 . chapter 9
good one keep going
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