Aw. wow, the intensity is intoxicating, my fav part was when Nini says, "Wanna know a secret?" God, that's perfect. Toward the end you see her, (or invision her) looking down, maybe fidgeting uncomfortably, but whispering, "And I'm sorry." I've wondered briefly what it takes to deal with fate in such tremendous proportions, to take love and hate and lives in the the simplest of words to the wrong person. How do you deal? Was it an accident? No. And it's your fault. ::shiver:: Mmm, isn't it delicious? Love this, keep it up.

it's ok.

I like this. :) Nini is my favourite character (with Satine coming a close second), and I like the way she expressed her true thoughts near the end - I have a feeling that she does feel sad for Satine, but just doesn't want to admit it to anyone, not even herself.

She's such a bitch, but hell, I love her! :)

Ooh meow! I could practically feel Nini raking her claws then! Fantastic fic, I loved it!

Although I hate Nini and have a different idea about why they don't like each other, I LOVE your fic! keep up the good work!

God I hate Nini! But you are a FANTASTIC WRITER! Keep on writing!

i like your fan fic, it clears up all that stuff between nini and satine. i never got why she was so mean, but she was.