Aw, that was adorable! Shiki and Neku are always so cute together!

Good job with keeping the characters non-OOC, everything they did seemed naturally, especially Eri. She acted exactly how I'd expect her to!

I didn't catch any grammatical or spelling errors while reading, so good job on that as well! All in all, I loved it! Zetta job! ;D

Keep writing!

How cute! I see Eri as the way Shiki described her: bubbly, sweet and a little pushy, so I guess you hit the nail on the head.

And you're right. Neku would be alot nicer after being in the UG.