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DarkFlameInfernal 2/17/12 . chapter 1
love it
YetAnotherJanewayFan 6/28/11 . chapter 1
Who in the world wouldn't mind Sebastian doing that. I for one wouldn't mind at all! That was great, almost perfect... Loved it...
mmym101 3/16/11 . chapter 1
that was very good!

i liked ciels last line lol

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Rin28 1/15/11 . chapter 1
OH MY pretty big nosebleed over here -looks down- darn it! I stained the carpet!
Yaoiholic28 11/13/10 . chapter 1
That was awesome! (:

I love SebbyxCiel.

A little repetitive, yes, but very much enjoyable. xDD
SerenitySoldier97 10/3/10 . chapter 1
YOU ARE AMAZING FOR CREATING THIS WONDERFUL PIECE OF FICTIONS.

ohmygawd, that was hot, LOL.
Meili-Hime 8/16/10 . chapter 1
I liked it, but the point of view was a little different to me. I loved how you mentioned the "person most important to you" thing. I almost forgot about that. :) I think your story has all the qualities of a great fanfiction. It was the perfect amount of words for a oneshot, but there was a little too much talk and not enough lemon to me. It sort of seemed rushed at the beginning of the lemon.
Mikuzu 8/8/10 . chapter 1
Oh, how lovely and enticing this fic was. Wonderful work, Ms. Mpathy. Did I mention that this was hot? :D
ulqui's-girl 6/30/10 . chapter 1
Oh I did enjoy as much as Sebastian did

Wouah I hope you make another chapter..it would actually be even better if finny and the others would hear them at night haha XD
violetkisses 6/17/10 . chapter 1
wow, that was awesomeeee
evalieciel91 6/1/10 . chapter 1
awesome! XD

*drooling*
muymuy 3/22/10 . chapter 1
Real good stuff! I never noticed anything I would call out as repetitive, so you shouldn't worry about that. I guarantee, all I see is a damn fine Kuroshitsuji story. And with an original plot (also read: sexiness), too! I hope to stumble across more from you in the future.
XFrenchieX 3/16/10 . chapter 1
This was a fantastic story!
Dpreukssiya 3/15/10 . chapter 1
HeHe... this was good! iv'e actually finished waatching the entire series, though we truly wish that something like this happened in the anime... it never did... little hints of romance between the pair, was in the anime however! this was a good story and to think that ciel a kid of 13 {he did have a birthday in the series} could bring his lovely demon to that of a pathetic moaning dog... BUT this was a wonderful story you should continue your writing. i look forward to another one of your stories!

MyDoll!
EchizenRyomaLover 3/13/10 . chapter 1
I liked it. I'll call it something like "snarky smut." Ciel and Sebastian were so hot, teasing each other in the middle of the moment. XD
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