Very interesting.

Does Sonny have another agenda?

How will everyone react to Jason, Carly, and the kids?

What about AJ?

Wonder why nobody else noticed what's been going on?

Please update ASAP

wow
that's a really good story thusfar
well on portraying thoughts of characters
verbage in general
like your random comments from you
probably u wrote this a long time ago, but continue, please!
maybe even mention emily and jason for a bit, but don't take away from the jas/carly

When will you be updateing or finishing this story?

i love it it! finally someone who likes jason and carly, please write more!1

I LUV IT! Please write more soon. Can we see a little more of A.j? maybe he could attack Carly or something one night, and, like, i dunno, maybe rape her...just suggestions!