You wrote this for English class? Pretty cool! :D Love it!

It looks like ate your format, if you had it separated into stanzas, but that happens a lot of the time. I lik ethe rhymes with "rage" and "sage" because those are two words that aren't often paired together, so it's more unique. "Lethal grace" is also a terrific little phrase. As a whole it's really good, and I wish I got assignments that fun in MY English class...