Oh oh oh! I realise this is late after all there are later stories. I know this because I started reading one of them and thought what? Who is Alchemy. Then I found this and thougth Ah, now I understand. This is so nice. I can easily ignore the occasional gramatical error because the story is so well plotted. Wonderful.

er errrr Why does Snape get everything taken away from him? He loved Alchemy and Alchemy loved him he should've got to take care of her. He saved her life! err I was too mad to even proparly sign in. Well I'm onto the next one. *Who's the shrub?*

I guess we do find out what turned Snape from a badie to a goodie. Very nice tale you've told here. I loved all of the ponderings in the church-that was nice.

Sara

Wow, excellent story. I found it after reading the sequel. Now l just hope you continue with the sequel, l am hanging out to see how it ends.

I was stupid enough to read the sequel to this before this one, so please ignore the other review that says 'I want to know who it is' because now I know who it is...!

It's a really great story, really well written and very imaginative. :)

Very very very very nice! I love it!

I'll review better for another chapter - I HAVE read it all, just don't have time to review all at the moment.

wow wow wow wow WOW.

This is an incredible story and you are the best! I loved every minute and every word of this story. Your understanding of Sev's fascinatingly deep character is beyond many i have seen.

I am afraid i will go on and be my shameless self and ask you to write more more moreeeee hehee especially about how Sev and Alchemy got together again as in "When the past comes back". If you wish to, of course. I'll still love you if you don't hehee.

love,

coesius

Wow _ This is an awesome fic! You are a brilliant writer- great, orginal plot, yet it wasn't lacking in description.

Great work_

VOLDEMORT IS EVIL! EVIL! EVILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!

Hey, I never knew I could feel bad for Severus Snape!

:-)

This is really good Keep writing it

That was really good, actually I'm still getting over how good it was considering I rarely read things with three chapters and juust one review. I'm amazed you don't have more reviews than this. It's so rare to find a truly original plot here (hell, I can't even manage to write one my self). It's very well written too. You're very good at description.

Oh wow! That was amazing! You really have some talent at writing! (well, maybe I'm just easily impressed, but I don't think so) you've gotta keep writing this story.