Oh, sweet heavens, I do hope you upload that last chapter. I need to know what favor Brenda has to ask and I won't allow myself to speculate lest my hopes go too high. Another fantastic story! Incredibly satisfying to read Layton's chance to comfort Luke alone together.

I started reading this today, and I have to admit: I got to the last chapter today. XD This story is amazing, and one of the best written PL fanfics that I have read! You portayed the characters fantastically, and I really, really, really wanna see how this story ends! I'll be waiting for that final chapter!

Please post the final chapter!

This has been so awesome so far, I'm really glad those thugs were put in their place (personaly, I think they should have gotten more brusies). I hate Clark in the game. I mean, he's nice enough I guess, but something about the way he talks to Luke ticks me off. (admitably, I haven't finished the game, but still.)

I really hate to be that guy who left a review that's really saying nothing more than OMG ILU U R BEST WRITER

But I really have very little else to say but OMG ILU YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER

Seriously, though. I've read this story through and through-I also did one of the things I hate as a fic-writer (subscribe to story alert without reviewing. Cruel). I love the characterization. Everything has been perfect, spot on-and I feel like that can be really difficult with Layton. It's not easy for Luke or Flora, either, but something about Layton's character is just..tough to get a good read on. But you've done a great job.

I come back to this fic to reread now and again as I await your next chapter! Please do finish, I was so (so, so, SO) excited to see you had posted a new chapter when you did!

And now I'm friends with you on Plurk (yup, same Bizzy here and there. I'm not creative with usernames). I promise I won't harass you about fic there, though, that's not cool.

I can't wait to see the end!

That was the first Layton fic I've ever read, and it was gooood. :) Can't wait for the last chapter!

Okay, I updated a story today, and said the "What is this?" thing.

So, most of this chapter was just explaining how Luke ended up in England, which is nice since I had issues figuring out why. I liked his play stupid plan but I did not like it. Ii cannot figure out why.

I also wanna say that I was reminded of Eternal Diva with him having two people inside his had.

And I wonder what Bre ask of Llayton...Although I could probably make a good guess...

Great story. Keep it up with the Layton fanfiction :D

love the story! I hope you continue soon :)

nice story :) i did have to read the previous chapter a bit to see what it was about again XD

but still it was all nice and dramatic ;)

Can't. Stop. Reading.

Yay! They're free! And nothing really went wrong! Something tells me that what happens next will be even harder for them: figuring out what to do with Luke.

Well SOMEONE'S certainly sick of being the damsel! Not that I don't agree or anything. I honestly do!

Anyway, love how you have the major rescue ready, then something goes wrong. I'm gonna go to the next chapter and see what happened.

You will carry on, won't you? I really wat to know what happens next!

I was thinking Don Paolo (sp?) in one of his many disguises. Oh boy, what are these fiends going to do to the children?