that wasn't nearly as torturing long as my first chapter lol much easier to read too. yeah that definitely sounds anime even though i've never heard of that show in my life! lol well that was quite a while ago that you wrote this chapter so i think that if you remember the plans you had for the story, you should finally update again soon. Hey, i suck at writing and i manage to update once in a while lol so i think you can too. it was a cute first chapter so hurry up and write chapter 2 before school starts dammit!

sounds like its going to be good hope to read the next chap soon

RITE MORE NOW! Or i'll send my little psycho dog on u! _ I like my little psycho dog. Ur a great riter keep it up.

Lady Lyra

hey amanda...this is a great story...but...i wanna find out what happens when they get drunk...so hurry up and write more! i think i should be added into the story to be their sex therapist! LOL

Ahh cute story!_ I hope you write more!

Hmmmmmmm, sounds great !

I wonder what happens next...

Pretty good so far, keep on going,PLEASE!

Keep going! sounds like fun!

(Liger roars) RIGHT LIGER! B/L FOREVER! Or else B/J FOREVER! (Konig rumbles) What you don't think B/J is a good pairing? Well thats just YOU! Me and Liger like it! (Liger growls) So good fic, I'll shut up now. (Liger carries her off in it's mouth) SEE YAAA!

i like this fic, put the next chap up soon

that was good. I want to know what happens next. Keep making fanfics. You pretty good.

Great story! Keep up the good work! plz continue

I bet they have sex and Lina tries to hide being pregnant! That leaves all kinds of goodies to collect!B/L! Woohoo! Beat up Brad! Keep going! !

Coooooooool! I've benn looking for a B/L! Oops! Enemy saber tigers closing in! Blast 'em Raptare! Wohoo!(Raptare is my personaly copyrighted zoid!) Oops! Better get back to the battle! Christof's blade liger's going down! Gimme' more!

thats a good fic funny and sweet at the same time