Awww that is truly beautiful. You have an amazing talent. It kept me reading until the end. I will always remember it.

What a wonderful story. This is what fairy tales should be about, what some of them were originally about. I love this story, mostly for the way you made the women human, with regrets and sadnesses. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece of award-worthy literature.

Oh, wow. This story is just exquisite. Pure beauty.

I've read a lot of fairy tales, but this has got to be one of the best. Keep writing!

Wow! What an incredible story! I loved it. Your characters were so real, and I loved your fracturization of the fairy tales. The first one was Snow White, the third Beauty, and the fourth Cinderella... but who was the second?

How on earth did I miss this! I read the entire fairytale catagory from bottom to top, and only found this by following Buttons goes to the Ball, but this is brilliant, hypnotic, subtle, facinating. I'm in absolute awe.

That was really, REALLY good! Whoa dude, I really enjoyed that. Nicely done, you are a wonderful storyteller. :D

Bravo!

That was amazing! An interesting take on the fairy tales of Snow White, Rapunzel, Beauty and Cinderella. I absolutely adore your style of writing. A fabulous piece. Good job!

Wow. That's all I can say. That was absolutely marvelous. I'm speechless. Very, very well done.

Wow. Incredible. Wonderful. Amazing. That was really good, you brought Snow White, Beauty, Cinderella, and Rapunzel to life in a way I didn't think possible. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!

That was an incredible story. And one that I would not have found except for the game of "follow the links". They rang so true to life, phenominal job.

Kendi

A fresh and vivid look at the fairytales you chose. I enjoyed your vision.

Wow. Knocked my socks off! What more can I say?

I've got to get my Da to read this. He loves fantasy-that's where I got my own love of it.

Truly amazing!

* Serenity *

Are you sure Cinderella is the ONLY storyteller here? I spy another one... the narrator...

KEEP WRITING! _ What happened to ADI?

Wow! What an incredible story. Your characters are so real, and their stories ring true. I'm speechless, that was just amazing!