O no Shes falling for Doug. Thats not good.

And when she finds out they are all cops...

I love it. I hope that bastard is caught by Doug, Judy, and Tom.

ok i have a very valid question you haven't even mentioned what she has so when will you?

Great style, you really meet the 21 jump street feeling.

It's depressing, the jump street officers are once again pushed to their sides.

One thing tough: why are all three set up to become her friends? wasn't one of them supposed to become her "enemy" and find out about the people abusing her?

And pleeeeaase check about your spelling and typing mistakes! Your story is great so don't let those mistakes ruin it!

Oh and I think it would be more logical if Dawn had already been abused before by her teacher - cuz why would he start JUST the moment jump street interferes... I mean, this sounds horribly harsh on Dawn but I think it would make the story more true-to-life?

Continue writing please!

aaaamaaaaaaaaazing! update soon!

Poor Dawn

i am glad Doug was there for her. Hopefully she will let him tell Judy and Hanson. That way they can all be there for her as friends.

I LOVED IT!

Poor Dawn! Update soon!

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Update! :D

Poor dawn.

She is attacked and know b/c of it is or might be pregnant.

I really hope the gang can be her friend or she will let them be hers. She needs to have somebody to talk to.

Wow, I never thought I'd see someone else write about this. I really enjoyed it a lot. I have Cerebral Palsy too, and I also wrote a story with a character who has CP in 21 jump street. Although, Dawn's is much more mild than mine or my character's. Anyway's enough about that. I can't wait to see what happens. I just thought it was a cool coincidence. UPDATE SOON.

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God I hate stupid teachers! I say we kick them all in the knee for being mean to Dawn. YAY Tom, Judy, and Doug!

poor dawn cant get a break. she has witnesses and she and they still get in trouble.

I hope they can take down the kids and teachers that hurt dawn all the time.

..guess you couldn't have been bothered to use spell check.

Ugh! Disgusting. I honestly would have kicked some ass. But then she has Cerebral Palsy, doesn't she. She would probably get hurt more than anyone else, right? I don't really know. All I know is that I know what that's like... Sort of. My cousin gets beat up a lot, 'cause he's Autistic. Which means I get my ass handed to me more often than not for defending him. Some people make me sick, ya know?

I can't wait for you to continue, though if I could make a suggestion? When you were jumping from scene to scene, I was a little confused. Maybe putting in a bar or something could get rid of said confusion for me and other readers.

Anyway, good story. But there is also a few errors. I don't know if you missed them. Nothing big, just typos and spelling. Just thought you'd like to know in case you wanted to fix them. Doesn't really bother me none.

-C.

Good start so far.

How can a teacher get away with that. That is so wrong.

Hope she warms up to them.