Aw, super. You really fleshed out the characters of Twitchy and Jack some more and they are a lot of fun. It was just great. I laughed out loud at so many different parts. The bane of young Dick's existence, a couple of two-bit crooks he can't seem to avoid. :)

Wow, that rocked. One of the best stories I've read on .
God bless you.

Excuse for one second while I crack up! This was very funny, but serious too which is a good combo, and you write both very well. I wasn't sure whether to laugh out loud, or remain quiet, and serious. You have a great talent for writing.

I could have sworn I reveiwed this. Oh well. I loved it, especially the 'grape juice' part. If I were Alfred, I would have put my foot down too. 'Abner John Levy'. *That* was *so* sweet!

I really liked it!

Nice! I like the ending and the fact that you're making Twitchy and Jack go straight.

What a great story! I love the way Alfred handled the bank supervisor! Go Alfred! When he said his silent prayer for Dick I had a lump in my throat. I could just imagine how devastated Bruce would be to finally let someone into his life and then lose him so quickly.

OoOoOoOh! This is probably the sweetest story around here!

really really good. i love the way this is written.