Very interesting story. Glad the medical review is not complete. Do feel bad for Jen, but now the gang has both her and Carson. As for Teyla and John...when the heck do they get together? Could you make it soon? PLEASE!

Just became a fan of Stargate: Atlantis, and I loved this story, especially the twist at the end with Illeura. One thing that I don't understand though, is who exactly are the Ascending Ancients, and where exactly are they watching from?

Oh and I also loved that touching Sheppard/Teyla moment! I did feel bad for Kanaan though.

I like this, you should expand the story.