What a laugh, I loved it...

lolololololololololololololol
need more for this insanity but i love it

that was wierd but for any successfull story with hitchikers guide you need the vogons and zaphod

I cracked up while reading this on the FFML, and I'm happy to see it here.

It was actually this spamfic that made me familiar enough with your name that when I ran across Sailor Moon 4200 I decided to read it. Which, by the way, I wonder why you don't post here. ^_^

ok that was riducolos but hell was that funny cant wait to see where this goes

I like it, a lot.. I'm just trying to figure out whether Ranma was the saxophonist for Ms. Tendo's erotic dancing, the teacher of said personage, or both!

With Ranma, you never can tell.

Pretty amusing. :D I especially liked "sensuous saxophony." Reminded me a bit of the old Goon Shows, from the 1950s. I think I might have broken up Nabiki's first "revelation" with a bit more dialog and/or descriptive narrative, because as it stands, the humor smacks the reader (literally and figuratively) over the head so quickly that they're not exactly sure what happened. And while that can be a good thing, especially where fanboys are concerned, it can also alienate people who might otherwise need just a bit of time to get in the spirit of things.

And on top of that, you know how to punctuate! You use grammar properly! You don't say approximately what you mean, but exactly what you want to say! You don't use ten exclamation points and question marks in a row when you want to express surprise!

Ain't literacy swell? ;)

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Um, could you at least make this much, MUCH more plausible please? Akane having a mother still alive, I can believe. Ranma somehow discovering time travel, well maybe. But how did you contrive this.... this.... work of fiction?

I hate giving bad reviews but this just... Needless to say, I don't like it