YES! Soniku woke up! :D :D :D :D

O.o NO! SHADOW AND SONIC! ILL SAVE U! but sadly, i dont live in Station Square... D: Meanie GUN, im gonna kill them... Mwhaha...

oh, I really like this story and the way you did everything...Love it! can't wait to read your other stories!

simply...incredible. I loved this story so much! Very detailed. A bit graphic, but nevertheless incredible. Great job! email me at ! ^^ I'm a fan!

BEAUTIFUL! I LOVED IT! *sighs happily* I laughed, I cried...it moved me. XD I NEVER read "M-rated" stories...but this one caught my eye...couldn't resist...and I'M SO GLAD I READ IT! :D I'm not one for cusses either (to whoever said that in their review)...but I can't say this story is terrible, either. This story is WONDERFUL. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. And thus...I tip my hat to you, great author! *tips imaginary hat* Great job!

i like it so far

now i have to finish reading it

man,all the torture!stop it!anyway...nice stuff

And several months, at least, since Thalia recommended it to me, I have started and finished reading this story XD

Very good. Not many stories can keep me going for fifteen MASSIVE chapters and keep me impressed. Well done indi :)

(I'm Ylva, but dang it I have to submit a proper log-inned review!)
My God, one cannot step away from this! You're the first to make me truly like all the new surroundings and characters. You give them life. And this story is impossible to stop reading. If I don't watch it I'm gonna be here all night. It never gets confusing, hard to follow or on the other hand overdone. And the story is intensely exciting. And now I can't talk more, I have to read.

I can't stop reading, everyone's lines are perfectly them and the interaction between them is great. The storyline so far unfolds smoothly through the "every day" scenes. I'll be reviewing again when I'm done with all of it.

Yes, please keep writing ;) if you haven't finished already! This is thrilling, you're very good at slowing down and accelerating suspense. I have no time to write any real review right now but you'll get one later!

awesome, i really like it. It's really interesting to read. Can u put in more violence?

omg! i have only read the first 2 pages and i already am having a whole bunch of fun! this is SO keepin me wantin more!

:)AWESOME JOB!(:

Good fic, but there are a few things you could work on:

1. Sonic should never be called "Sonikku" unless the fanfic is in Japanese. That name is used by the Japanese because "Sonic" cannot be written in kanji. If you're not writing in Japanese, don't use it. If you must give him a second name, try his proper name in the comics series, Olgilvie Maurice, or make one up yourself.

2. Lose the little conversations between the characters and yourself before the chapters. They irritate the hell out of me. I want to read a story, not hear you talk to yourself.

3. You seem to have a fixation on the characters' eyes. We already know the characters' eye colors. And words like "emerald" and "crimson" substituted for "green" and "red" sound pretentious and flowery.

4. I doubt the peach patches on Sonic's chest, muzzle and arms are covered with any fur at all. Those are probably bald patches.

5. Sonic can be silly, but also keep in mind that he is very proud and would not take silliness so far as to debase himself.

6. Sonic and Shadow haven't read the SA2 manual. They don't know what the robots are called. They just know that they're big and stompy and have a lot of guns.

7. One reviewer had criticized my story for repeating plot points, but I disagreed that the repetition I used in The Broken Mirror was that bad, because each repetition had something of value in it, such as conveying an important plot point to a character who had not seen that point directly but would later act on it, or showing a new perspective or new information on a plot point. But you basically hit the reset button and restarted the entire story halfway through. The second half's tortures could be merged into the first half and you would get a much better-paced, exciting story.

Overall, it's not a bad story, but it could be a lot better. You have a lot of potential, so keep it up.

That was extremely good. Though I normally don't like swearing...it DID add a bit of realism to this...and probably made emotions more poignant.

Excelent, excelent read. And I'm glad that scientist got what was coming to him...

RENI: Oh yeah...Hear YOU talk...all the sadistic things you've put me through...

>.> That's beyond the point, Reni...

RENI: IS it? Is it REALLY?...

Ahem...anywah...The ending was really endearing, too.

GOOD job! :D