Interesting story.

Just a technical note - Jelly is refered to as "foaming up soap in his hands" but he only has one (it being the point of the story).

Oh, I love it. But I hope that Reece and Stave don't read it because Mr Jelly is played by Reece and you didn't exactly flatter his naked body. :) I love this story though and people should definitely watch Psychoville! It's amazing!

Oh, this is fantastic! I loved it.

It's good to see that someone other than me watches this show. You wrote the characters really well. Great story. :)