Another interesting snippet that was delightful to read!

This was an interesting alternative to the other. Why did it not fit? Not that the other one was bad, or anything.

Great work! I really like these additions and i'm glad you posted them so everyone could read them! I especially liked the birthday scene. You painted a really sweet picture. Especially since you mentioned baklava, which is the best food ever created. The first person to cook it up should have been given a medal of solid gold. Anyway, your work is fantastic and I am extremely excited to read more of it in the future! (and good luck with all your school work!)

Reading this kinda stuff reminds me why I put you on my favorite authors list.

nice companion pieces to the batman stories... can't wait for new updates :)

Wow I didn't expect this for another few days. Thank you! I particularily liked the glimpse into the compound's setting-in the most recent chapters the pool, fence, and air conditioned computer room are alluded to, but it always felt like we were playing catch up. A little more information is lovely! Thanks for writing!

mb

I'm liking the deleted scenes/alternate endings :)

Good stuff, especially in conjuncture with the new chapter, looking forward to more