|Reviews for Shadows|
| Bullwinkle's Lady 3/30/10 . chapter 1
Very nice piece. I think it's cute that you made Hinata a bookworm, and I think her characterization corresponds well with the concept - especially her exaggerated reactions to the story, lol, and the fact that it's her second reading of it.
She's so innocent and a little childish, whereas Sasuke's curious and probably finds her rather odd. It feels so true to SasuHina. I liked that they were similar in the fact that they'd both isolate themselves during a social outing, and different, if just because of their motives behind withdrawing. I also liked seeing you compare their choice of reading material. Sasuke does seem like a mystery novel type. I see it as a healthy medium between academic texts and gorey horror novels, and it's just what Sasuke WOULD read, considering the other genres I associate him with would just be too much toward one side of his characterization spectrum thingy. Very cute story.
| 1Ai-chan7 3/15/10 . chapter 1
simple but cute
| coco-toko 3/11/10 . chapter 1
I like it. Some parts could have flowed a bit cleaner but overall I like your word choice as well as the idea.
| evilbananalol 3/11/10 . chapter 1
it was cute and fluffy
like a bunny wabbitt!
| ppeach2 3/11/10 . chapter 1
Aww it was nice kinda cute. ]
| luckyclover15 3/11/10 . chapter 1
I like it! Kawaii! LOL you should make a sequel if it's possible. Anyway, great job! -KF
| Guest 3/11/10 . chapter 1
You cut it too short, for my liking at least. I think you should extend their talk
| Aqua Amethyst Angel 3/11/10 . chapter 1
that was very well done!