Good chapter. I know that Albus has to flatter Bane to get Snape and Umbridge out from their captivity, but it does seem odd that they punished Snape for trying to rescue Umbridge, but didn't touch Umbridge at all.

Let's see, Umbridge insulted and assaulted the centaurs, so of course Snape is the one to be punished. Well, isn't _that_ like canon, sigh.

Glad the queen of the _herd_ (note spelling) knows better.

But of course Snape is always punished for rescuing people-we see that all the time in canon (PoA, for instance). Not surprised he's blamed for everything that goes wrong (heaven only knows the Trio do it all the time, and Dumbledore is perfectly happy with that).

Good. I especially liked the end with Snape managing to avoid Voldemort's wrath.

One typo I spotted: "you a superior" should be "you are superior"

Keep on writing.

Not bad. Again, more good thoughts from Umbridge. You have her character nailed. Still a lot of long, run-on sentences that need to be tightened.

Some typos I caught: "death eaters" should be "Death Eaters"

"I will sent" should be "I will send"

Keep on writing.

Not bad. Boy, you put Snape through hell. I thought you did a good job getting into Snape's head. You did have some run on sentences and were missing some commas in places. I'm also curious why Celia decided to release Snape.

A couple typos I caught: "Deloris" should be "Dolores"

"professor Snape" should be "Professor Snape"

Keep on writing.

Good short story after all,but I would have let Umbridge get what was forward to future works.

Whoa! That was kind of a short story wasn't it? :{

JimS

Oh, wow, I really thought you would write some smut here. ;)

So will this story go on? I find it interesting!

wow it was a good chapter thanks

Good chapter,I am glad Severus is being treated well by the centaurs but the they should give Umbridge a lession she wont forget along with a visit to the spiders of the will be regretting this favor to save next chapter.

This story is unique,but someone else should have went after her like Fudge himself.I would like to see him explain to Bane and the others why he is against them.I hope your going to put the fear of god in Umbridge herself.

I have to disagree with you on this story! Whatever happens to Umbridge, she deserves! :{

JimS

I give a shit on Umbridge but I'm worried for Severus. Will there come more to this story? I think it is a great start.

Sunny