Hey just wanted to let you know that I read the entire piece and found out it was a beautifully written piece! _ I truly loved it a lot and it's interesting about choosing Michiru as a mermaid. It reminded me of The Little Mermaid, but a lot more feeling put into it. The descriptions were beautifully created so that I could actually picture all of it in my mind. Haha I'm a huge fan of Haruka and Michiru. _ Keep up the fantastic work! :D

Wow. It was really nicely written... Can't say that I thoroughly enjoyed the story though... H&M just seemed too out of place in this universe. All I could think about was the little mermaid while reading this and there were just a lot of parts that made me wince. I think it was mostly due to both H&M being so young, inexperienced and innocent with each other. Newbies at anything make me cringe haha. But anyways, it may not have been my cup of tea, but it was certainly a valiant effort! I liked the ending a lot. You should perhaps write a story of H&M a few years later living their lives in that era. D I bet I'd like that very much. Thanks again!

WOW! That was EXCELLENT! I really enjoyed your sailor dialogue.

You got me laughing when Haruka's father said "Sailor Senshi?" And I loved her Sword fight. Keep up the great work!

wow, I remember reading this on here 5 years ago. Glad to see it's still here, I loved it.

I cant believe I never reviewed this story, I think I might have read it before I wrote Love lore. I think your story inspired mine. Reading about michiru as a mermaid makes me want to write another story. This is beautifully written.

Oh! I LOVE this fic!

That "sailor senshi" joke is so funny!

I am glad that Ruka and Michi ended up together

I personally would like to witness their wedding!

Oh, this story is really neat. It's a well-done Michiru's-a-mermaid fic, and the way she turned human was cool. Good job!

That is one of the most beautiful fanfictions i have ever read. I enjoy reading all of your work, as I am myself a Haruka and Michiru fan. Thank-you for writing these wonderful stories and keep up the good work!

Great! Haruka and Michiru are the best pairing in Anime history and I am so glad you write so many stories about them!
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this fic was simply beautiful. i am very glad that i read it. i hope that you have written some other fics. i will check your name. _ -amiko kun

all I gotta say is...I LOVE IT!

Saun, i'm a big fan of your work, and this is one of my favorites! reason is, I've watched The Little Mermaid so many times, I love fantasy stories, I REALLY, REALLY LOVE SAILOR MOON, and my favorite couple in the whole series is haruka and michiru!

I'd like to see more of your stories so keep writing!

That was a fantastic story. I loved it so much. I'd have to say that my favorite part was when Dalwood told the Duke that they found Haruka. I burst out laughing when I first read it! Keep up the good work.

WOW Damm cool fanfic! I loved it! The szene where a cuorius Michiru was discovering a body was really funny and well ...*blushes* (you understand what i mean, dont you?)The Sailor senshi joke was was well placed *gg* I have only one little question, why did the Sailors chose this Island? They cant have knowen, that she was still alive and an other Island could have been better... Well you are the writer ;-)Heh, Ive read so much Storys form you lately, i think i became a fan _"

hey all of your stories kick ass please if your are able to please email them all to me i do dearly love them all plus you write only haruka and michiru stories right well so do i if at all possible could you read the one i am writing p,lease it is called Star Child me pen name is Shibi Star

You show great promise as a writer. I look foward to the sequel. Not many people can pull it off, but you have melded the Sailor Moon characters with the realm of Feary Tales beautifully. I'll have to read some more of your work.