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   Shadow Heart Hawk-eye 11/4/11 . chapter 1Very fluffy! Roy is such a sweetheart to Ed. Ed loves his Roy-Roy;) |
| TheInkPrincess 7/9/10 . chapter 1 Drools... LOVE IT! |
| NARUTO'S HOT BOOTY 3/30/10 . chapter 1 Ok, Epic Lemon :D I am very intersted in seeing more from you. |
| merlyn1382 3/26/10 . chapter 1 now thats a breakfast in bed i wouldn't mind |
| Amethyst-eyed Koneko 3/17/10 . chapter 1 Ah! Nice little PWP! :D One word of advice tho. Drop the cutesy "Edo-kun" and "chibi". One, cutesy words have no business in a p0rn story and two, throwing random Japanese words in an English fic is distracting and, according to some, juvenile. Pick one language and stay with it. Other than this, I liked it. :) Oh. You got a typo in paragraph five. Ed "breaks the kill". I think you meant "breaks the kiss". Might wanna fix that. :) |
| Purishirakun 3/13/10 . chapter 1 it was great! x] |
| TheYukiii 3/13/10 . chapter 1 Wonderful story 3 Very good gramma, a pleasure to read. Keep up the good work 3 |
