Wow! I found this story the other day - and I'm hooked. I just finished reading this in one sitting and I love it... I was wondering whether you were going continue this story - and if you aren't, would you mind pming a plot synoposis or something?

Thanks!

I hope that one day you finish this story. you write all the characters so well,weave so compelling a tale that it would be a shame (in my opinion) that it not be completed. And your interpretation of Toph! I love it.

oh my god, this is just getting interesting, too bad you haven't updated in a year. I do hope you finish this story.

This is an awesome story! I particularly like the relationship between Toph and Mai and Toph and Zuko. Zuko is a hard-headed honorable man of extremes and I think he would have done exactly as you depicted (though I don't know if he would have used the mask, as what does he have to fear from the earth nation finding out who he is... though it did serve well for the plot).

Anyway, I can't wait for your next chapter update to see what Lu Ten and Ty Lee are going to do with Azula...

Nice I loved it it wasn't too slow nor too fast it was jsut right and it really stuck tot he avater theme, great work man!

Found this over on StarDestroyer through a list of top AtLA fanfiction. it's definitely living up to the title so far... but are you going to finish it? O.O please?

To have Toph as the Avatar isn't something you read every day, but I really like the way you wrote this story. The dynamic between her and Mai is really, well, AWESOME, in every way imaginable. Honestly, I can't put into words how impressively written it is. But then, the whole story is so impressive! The constant ego attacks between Lu Ten (he lives!) and Azula, the Avatar past (Aang, poor guy!), a non-banished Zuko (though getting banished really shaped his character in the series), Mai, being more recognized as the brave (and yes, Caring) person she is, it's all a pleasure to read:)

One thing: isn't there a certain order to how the elements should be mastered? Since Toph isn't exactly following that order, will it change anything or not really matter?

Hope this story continues!

A new and differnt story. I hope you plan to continue this. I think its kinda sad that Aang died so young and has no fiends in the spirit world. Toph makes for an interesting Avatar. I was wondering for awhile what happened to Sokka and Katara until I realised you made gran gran the avatar effectively killing them off. I really did enjoy this and I want to know what happens next.

I really enjoyed this story, having read through it all in one day. The characterization of Mai and Toph is amusing. I hope you have no abandoned it. :(

this is the first avatar fic iv read and im glad i was this one because it is written very well. the way you describe the bending is great as well as the conversations between mai and toph. it says you havent updated in a little while so i hope you havent dropped the story but either way i liked what you had down so far.

Here is another one of your stories I enjoy reading! Please write more if time and opportunity will permit you.

This is good. Seriously needs an update.

Great story! I'd like to read more of it!

Yay! A decent Toph fanfiction! But seriously, this hasn't been updated in moths... DDD: I hope you decide to update again, because therre's not much until you could finish this fanfiction, and this is a story that truly deserves and ending.

TV Tropes recomended this and I'm glad for it. Odd opening, but necessary to get the plot rolling. That being said, Toph is a thousand times more awesome an Avatar than Aang.