This was really good! U should add more chapters

Awww.. there isn't a chance for a sequel with a happy ending for Bakura, is there?

DO. A. SEQUEL. MAKE IT ANGSTY. FUCKING DO IT. THIS. WAS. GREAT. I want to see more :D.

Being a huge Bakura fangirl this story was rather sad for me. But I admire you for going with the less obvious ending.

Most would have made the two hook up in the end, but you did no such thing.

And despite the fact that said outcome makes my heart ache, I am still pleasantly surprised by the turn-out.

To me, Bakura has always gotten the short end of the stick; family, friends and fellow villagers getting brutally slaughtered. Getting possessed by a demon. Having revenge fall short even with his new found power. And now this, the most common disappointment of them all; unrequited love.

The outcome was fitting, in a sad sort of way. So I thank you for writing/sharing this. I enjoyed it immensely, for if I were to try and right this myself, my fangirl side would surely take over and make it a "happy ending" ;D

kvcsjfds;kfasfd THIS...;A: all my hugs to bakura xD PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEAL TO THIS! 030 I feel so bad for bakura...but I love how you didn't overdo it and and this fanfic was short and sweet(in the it had the right amount of sugar) to the point.

Oh my gosh you can't leave the story there! That's just wrong! Please write another chapter! Or a sequel! If you don't I'll cut off TDD's toes!

TDD: What?

PLEASE!

Man... this was so sad. :'( I really like it. To be honest, I really thought he was going to commit suicide. Maybe then Marik would have understood that life isn't a game. OR, he probably had Anzu, so... I hope I don't have to point it out.

WTF IS THISSSS! I demand a SEQUEL! And this time he gets Marik... I DEMAND IT!

-DxH

Oh, that's awful. A good awful, though. And as much as I want to beg you to continue, I can see that this is also the place to stop. But... But I still want Bakura to get him in the end regardless, damnit!

... FFFFFFF.

Trustshipping FTW though. Yay. :D One of my favourite het pairings Love it when it manages to sneak into a story.

Am I a sucker for stories with sad endings? YES.

Even though deep inside I would have loved a bright, cheerful, happy ending (and it pains me to admit it), this was just...

Ugh. I can't believe Marik would ever choose Anzu. In fact if I were being all logical and a canon nazi I definitely wouldn't believe it. But do you know why that relationship works? Because it annoys the hell out of me and makes me love Bakura and want him to have his prince in shining armour more and more. So, every cloud has a silver lining?

(You can imagine me ranting here). How could he ever choose Anzu over Bakura? That's an insult to him! She doesn't share his psychotic ambitions! She's not cold enough, or wicked enough, or...blah blah blah.

But anyway good story. Well written. Bitchy, annoyed Bakura is always good. As is his imagination. Pity it doesn't come into fruition, but never mind.

Of course I'll continue to imagine that Anzu dies in a forest fire and Marik comes to his senses... Ha ha. I wish.

C-cruel, but amazing. My poor Kura, he goes through so much and no one even notices. :(

I actually almost cried. Almost, so close to bawling and rolling around the floor. But I needed the angst, angst is good for you health! : ...sometimes.

Good story, though it made me sad...could feel all his anxiety

The story was really good. But I think that maybe you should write a sequel or something, it just doesn't feel complete y'know?

NO! Poor 'Kura, how could you do this to him!

Anyways, good story. Thanks for the hard work! And I hate Anzu even more now, good enough!

You know... this couldturn into quite a brilliant story... hint hint ;)

please consider it! i'd do anything! I love psychoshipping! And i really thinkthat thios could be a great beginning to an even better story!

:D Im gunna fav it and hopethat you do decide toadd to it... come on Bakura, tell him how you feel!

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