Very good story line. A couple of things I could point out as wrong: The transitions between character groups. I was a little confused when trying to figure out whether I was with Kate&Ziva, Gibbs&comp. or Eli D. The other thing is that you spelled Kate's full name wrong. I think it is spelled with a K. I might be wrong, but I would consider looking it up. Keep writing!

That doesn't sound good at all. I hope that they can figure out where they are being held. Maybe look for background noise on phone call. I wonder what they want from Eli.

interesting start. can't wait to see where this goes!

like the fic! please update again soon!

i need more! hurry it up already!speaking of which, how many chapters are you planning to put in? canyou update soon, pretty please?

Good start...have to read more to see if I want to read more. The characters are well written and so far like the humor. More soon.