Everything was great except "I hope you die in help". I'm pretty sure you meant "I hope you die in hell", but if he was in hell, he would already be dead. So he couldn't die in hell. The expression is "I hope you rot in hell". But other than that, it was great. I especially loved the part about blinking. "If you blinked, you'd miss the gunshot. If you blinked again, you'd never see how the blood spattered." That was perfect.

I really enjoyed it. Fabulous one shot. I could actually see it in my mind.

dark, but i like it :)

that was an interesting story!

but it was good!

oh this is so sad! :( it makes me want 2 kill harrison! :0 I'm in a sad mood now (check out my new fanfic you'll se why) and this made me even sadder! :)

good the last part was hard bue really good