OH MY GOD! That was a shocker right at the end! ^_^ now THAT is what I call a real cliff-hanger. Nice job!

But if you don't continue I will do my best to hunt you down and kill you. Hee hee, just kidding!! ^_^ I'll just give you a great, big hug for writing such a wonderful story! ::hugs brilliant author::

Please don't stop writing this story! It's just too good to stop! You left everyone on a cliff-hanger and you're torturing me with anticipation! ::pulls hair insanely:: I have to know what happens next! Muraki is so interesting!

And I have to tell you that I really admire your writing style. It's so unique and captivating. I honestly have fallen for this story. So please don't stop writing. ^_^ keep up the magnificent work!

YES! ::cheers insanely:: the mother is dead! The way you described the whole scene was satisfying and breathtaking! I was so exhilarted! ^_^ yes, I really wanted her to come to a justifying ending with Kazutaka killing her. I suppose I'm a cruel person. ^_^;

This story just got a whole stage deeper. I thought Saki killed Kazutaka's parents, but that certainly doesn't matter! I really like how this story is developing. It's so integral for Muraki's dark past.

I love your work! Wonderful job!

Oh, yeah. ::nod nod:: It's clear what, um, Kazutaka did to Saki. ^_^;

You have such beautiful writing! The way you use imagery and tone is so "WOW". Okay, I'm not the most eloquent person, but just know that I really love your writing! And I really love this story!! ^_^ Ah! I can't stop reading this story!

Wow.this really is just a beautiful story forming right here. Your references from the bible seem to take perfect shape in Muraki's life.

Sugoi!! ::claps hands together happily:: you are such a wonderful writer! The story gets so much more interesting and deep by each sentence! ^_^ love the work!

So well-written! And it's a Muraki-fanfic! =^^= ::gushes like an insane school-girl:: oh, yay! I can tell from now that you're going to portray him wonderfully and 'in-character'. ^_^ ::happily skips off to next chapter::

Dear eva-kokaze-black-san:
That was long! May I call you Eva-san instead? Forgive me if do not like it. Anyway, will it be too late to ask you to continue this fiction? "Broken Doll" is too beautiful a piece to be discontinued, especially not when it was getting SO interesting! Please finish this fic if you have time. I love your fiction, and would like very much to see "Broken Doll" continued. Muraki is such a fascinating character, and his relationship with Saki (which is not depicted clearly in anime or manga) leaves a lot of room for speculation. Please keep up your great work!

Regina

This is comming along quite well. Saki seems like a loveable guy. I really want to see what happens next, and what measures people will go through to keep Tsuzuki and Hisoka from having another meeting with Muraki.

This is getting more and more interesting!!! I can't wait to know more about what happened with Kazutaka & Saki. Saki is sooo beautiful!!!! *^^* I like him very much, I can't see him like a demon *^^* (actually, he did nothing in the manga version, I don't know why Muraki sensei hates him that much @@;;;;)
Please write the next part soon!!! (^o^)

This was wonderful!!!! I love Saki kun very much from the first time I saw him, but nobody gives him any attention (^^;;;). I'm so happy to find a fic about him!! And it's a very interesting fic! Waaaai!!! I can't wait to read the next part, please write it soon!! (^^)

Nice story! I always wanted to read a story about Muraki's past. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work, and please write more!

Ahh, a glimpse into the truly frightening territory of Muraki's mind! Glad to see someone
exploring the Saki character--this last bit makes me think that all we've seen of him is glimpsed through Muraki's memories...and who's to know how true they are? Am looking forward to more...

Well, this is quite interesting. Saki doesn't seem to be as evil as Muraki makes him out to be, so I wonder if it's all in our psycho doctor's head or does Saki change?
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Gaaaahhh.... that was creepy. I mean shudder-running-down-the-spine type creepy. No wonder he turned out to be such a mysoginistic psycho, with a background like that. Good prologue-- can't wait for the next bit.

Interesting beginning, I'm looking forward to more.