I really loved this story! It was soo sad i almost cried, poor marshmallow loving Snape! Lol.

I loved how you described their complex relationship from hatred to admiration and love. Really well percieved! :)

Severus Snape is one of my favourite HP characters i have to say and i loved how you made him slightly humorous in this, fitted really well surprising with his usual snarling characteristics.

Anyways, keep up the good work and i hope to read more from you soon!

Jessica xx

this was sad and funny all at the same time. I really liked it. Something about Snape and marshmallows just made my day. It is kind of hard to picture Snape doing anything normal like drinking hot chocolate, but you made it work. Great story!

The last word cracked me up :)Good job with the story. It's moving yet cute.

hahaha very sweet..

marshmallow.. lol

would have never called snape a marshmallow to his face ;)

sad and sweet... wonderful combination,

thank you for leaving my favorite character with a beautiful last moment

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A worthy read. Thanks for sharing this with us. It's very well-written. :)

This is a beautiful story. I found it very moving and incredibly well written. Thank you for sharing it with us.

I love it. It is great.

this is cute :) not very plausible, but still cute, in that wouldn't-it-have-been-nice way :)

This was an amazing oneshot, I cryed so hard at the end, it was sad and sweet.

Severus Snape

Teacher, friend and beloved mentor and father figure

Will be sorely missed to those that truly knew him

Hero in the Great War

The bravest man I ever knew

Marshmallow
-wipes a tear from my eye- Marshmallow, -chokes back a sob- You did a really good job, keep up the great work. You captured Severus just how he should be remembered, a hero.
Thank you.

Oh, that was so cute and sad and sentimental! :O I almost cried. :( Though I burst laughing at that last line. Harry actually wrote Marshmallow on his grave? xD Ha! That was really funny, and a great endin. It summed the story in a way nothing else could have. ) Great job, I really enjoyed reading it!

Wow this is so sweet it made me cry and it's really believable i could see this as cannon so well done and write more please you've got a real talent

SNAPE. ;A;

Gosh, you made me weep and cry and sniff and blubber. I love this piece of work.

I like the relationship between him & Harry, especially the Marshmallow bit.. It's so original and so.. GAH! you're making me cry all over again!

A job well done. Write more of these in the future, yeah?

Aww... that's really sappy... in a very good way! I love it. Made me a sniffling blubbering fool as Snape would put it. Great work! :)