 scarletbliss 2/5/03 . chapter 1 short... too short to get the "romantic feel" of the story...
it's good though... but would have been better if it was a bit longer |
 Raziel the reaver 1/15/03 . chapter 1 hehehe At least its not a yaoi fic but its so kawaii so please make me a sequel |
 Rune Valentine 4/23/02 . chapter 1Too short...
Must write more...
Or else...
Jk...
Nice job...
Keep it up...
8) |
 Rio 4/5/02 . chapter 1 short but sweet as a person would say. by the way who the heck is melvin? |
 colin 2/10/02 . chapter 1 its...short. but...nice.
ja! |
 Sailor Star Sakura 2/2/02 . chapter 1 Its very nice... I liked it... but you are going to continue right.. well anyway gotta go...
JA NE |
 MoshiMoshiQueen 2/2/02 . chapter 1i thought it was really kawaii! |
 o0shootingstar0o 2/2/02 . chapter 1A good start. It just was too short. i thought you would have probably made a better story if it was longer. well good job anyway Ja ne _. |