Aww this is SO beautiful, & yet terribly sad

He went home, YAY! I swear, I was gonna cry when she saw him again.

So BEAUTIFUL, & the happy ending… Aw, I LOVE this!

I swear, I thought u were gonna have me bawling my eyes out the whole time through

You’ve got skills, u know the right way to mix haha into aw!

That song sounds GORGEOUS; I HAVE to look it up!

Beautiful lines:

“If I was playing poker right now, I would show my cards and give you my heart”

"Please tell me this isn't a dream" "If it is, I never want to wake up”

“I can't imagine my life without you in it and you have been my heaven through this hell.”

"I knew I had a hot and smart girlfriend for a reason” (FUNNY!)

AW, every word of his engagement speech had me smiling ear 2 ear. AW. Such BEAUTIFUL & true words. AW

“I would love her until the day I die” (HE BETTER! ha!)

They are SERIOUSLY a BEAUTIFUL couple! I LOVE them SO much! They make every day brighter for me. In my eyes, him coming to Port Charles, convincing her to date him, and having her fall in love with him are the best decisions he’s ever made! I believe Lulu is his present and future. They really are the loves of each other’s lives! :D

J.M.O: To me, the Olivia part made no sense & was just THERE to have Dante go home to P.C.

DAMN IT! You did that! The engagement ring, in my opinion, pulls the story too far & makes it too unbelievable! Elope? Again. Too far-fetched! The tattoo? Where do u get this inconceivable stuff from? I’m not saying that I don’t love the story, cus I do LOVE it, but what’s with all this unbelievable stuff?

I think, you want to keep your story believable. You don’t just want to throw in all this stuff to have a happy story/ending. I think you can still have a happy story if you leave out all this inconceivable crap. It’s just my opinion! (Don’t hate me)

wonderful story! I loved it!

WOW... i love the song and i loved this story!

listened to it while reading the story.

i literally cried the whole way through.

you did a great job!