|Reviews for Puppet Strings|
| caylender 4/7/10 . chapter 1
I never thought I'd see the day where I would read a Power Puff Girl story and love it. This fic is a work of art!
| xXAmitanXx 3/14/10 . chapter 1
Hm...it wasn't one of the most nicest stories, but still good, though you made some mistakes as in:
"What else did could she do?" the did was useless also couldn't already means could not, if you write like this "Couldn't not" then it means could not not.
A comma after God was needed. "They were disgusting and stupid, and brutal." another comma after the second 'and'. (my teacher said if 'and' duplicates then you have to put a comma after the second one.)
I only followed the grammar that far. You surprised me later, so I forgot. These were the mistakes that I saw.
| Lightheaded 3/14/10 . chapter 1
Holy shit! O_O
*Puts this on her favourites.*