damn. no strings. i'm glad he said that because it feels more real to me but damn like right after...

It's brilliant! But I can't believe you ended it there!

its done? really? I has a sad now. Excuse me while I go cry in the corner.

I want my own lucky nerd monkey. Thanks for sharing.

Wow. This is a really good plot and I'm kinda pouty because I was hoping there would be a sequel. Oh well, it was still a damn good read!

I loved this but the ending made me kind of sad. Damn it Jasper!

of course there are strings! it's too good to end like this!

Since this was written two years ago I assume I shouldn’t be hoping for more of the boys – such a pity. I enjoyed the story immensely.

Thank you so much for sharing.

NOOOoooooo! BUT I want strings! omg... This can't be all... I want more! Sorry... am a slash hoor and ur story was rec'd to me on FB and I am in LOVE! New fav authors now! WHOOT!

Hey!

Did you ever think of making a complete story out of this?

I loved the story and I think it's so sad that

we won't ever get to know anything about the morning after..

I'm sure lots of other readers thing the same )

Good work!

That was really sad.. But Hot! Well written..

3 Leona :)

OMG! you have to make a sequel for this! i'm in love! :D great read. thank you. (:

I can't believe you left it without those two getting together properly - you evil lady you

Aw, I hope you two end up adding to this because it's obvious to me that they do care for each other but can't seem to make themselves show it. TLC

I want to kick somebody in the shin for those "no strings".

Most likely Edward & Jasper.

You can't let the story end this way. Please. :I

I want to see more of those boys! A loooot more, please! :I