| Reviews for Free Willy – Champion of the Sea |
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waang 6/3/12 . chapter 1 10/10 i cried |
YES 2/5/12 . chapter 1 "That's what you think cocksucker!" and Free Willy charges a laser attack and the shark drowns. Best line ever. Of all time. |
Sidh 6/29/11 . chapter 1 "that's what you think cocksucker"...it cant get beter than that... |
MichaelaZacharias 5/15/11 . chapter 1You do know that the name of the whale is not actually 'Free Willy'? It's just 'Willy' and in the other movies they want to 'Free' him... get it? Free. Willy. Btw; wtf? Cocksucker? Telekeneisees? A whale listening to the news on the radio? And OMG: Willy using a laser attack? |
ok 4/26/11 . chapter 1 ... |
anne 11/13/10 . chapter 1 Whale's can't talk |
OMG 11/10/10 . chapter 1 I almost died laughing. "It was a sad cry with emotion." Best. sentence. ever. And telekeneisees! (It's super-effective!) |
Ziggypiggy 10/14/10 . chapter 1 That was the most beautiful fic I ever read you sir should be famous |
iloveromance 9/6/10 . chapter 1I'm sorry that so many of the reviews you've gotten are negative. Your story is very creative, and I loved the opening sentence. In fact, that's what intrigued me into reading it. That being said, it was simple and short, but I would have liked it to be a little longer. From your description it sounds like a great story. I would love to see how Willy would rescue a little boy who, perhaps was drowning or in danger. I would probably refrain from so much negativity and foul language, since those weren't used in the movie. Thanks for sharing it. I'm not a professional writer, but I have written a lot of stories for this site. It's taken me many years to improve on my writing skills, so don't get discouraged! |
Alexia14v 7/7/10 . chapter 1 wow um... im speechless this story is just...idk wow. how old are you exactly? theres a lot of grammar errors and its really short. I find it amusing how terrible it is :) |
Carmen 7/7/10 . chapter 1 The part where Free Willy yells, "THAT'S WHAT YOU THINK, COCKSUCKER," really pulls it all together. The laser is pretty pimpin', too. |
Ken 6/21/10 . chapter 1 Wow, really touching. |
BLah 6/3/10 . chapter 1 Blehhh |
kites and meanies 6/3/10 . chapter 1 i think i love you i like kites and free willy he seems so nice i saw this movie a few years back and i loved it the ending is so sweet your story is da bomb Love, kites and rainbows & meanie bo beanie |
Jasonbobdude 6/3/10 . chapter 1This is everything I hoped a Free Willy fanfiction could be. Awful grammar and talking whales. |