|Reviews for Grey Areas|
| Aeidhryn 6/30/11 . chapter 1
You're really funny in this one, which is surprising, since the subject matter is fluffy and angsty, so congrats, I guess. I was going to quote my favorite funny moments, but there were so many I eventually got tired of copy&pasting and just read.
Quick grammar correction for ya there:
"She was so much braver than him" is incorrect. It SOUNDS correct because Tony's pronoun comes after "than", which is a preposition, but really, this is shorthand for
"She was so much braver than HE WAS", so therefore, it should be written
"She was so much braver than he." Or you could just add the "was" at the end so it doesn't sound so hinky.
Believe me. I just took an SAT grammar class today. I've been reviewing my English notebooks. I know.
That's all for now, my new favorite!
| Maggie 11/3/10 . chapter 1
, love it! :) Lightened my dark mood :)
| Ele Goddess of Elements 8/9/10 . chapter 1
:) very very very very very very very very sweet
| ThereIsAlwaysAnotherMonster 7/24/10 . chapter 1
OOH OOH OOH OOH OOH!
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS STORY!
WOW! So going in my favourites! A little puppy love makes everything better ;)
| Redmannequin 7/9/10 . chapter 1
such a awesome story
loved every moment
| ScarletCourt 6/9/10 . chapter 1
I was wondering what you were up to and just realized that I never reviewed this story. My bad. Hoping that this will make up for it.
You know, you write Tony so well. You capture his brooding as well as his feelings for Ziva exquisitely. I never made the connection between Tony's interrogation of Mayne and Salim's interrogation of Ziva but you have a point.
Loved how Gibbs knew that Tony needed to see Abby and Mortimer. Mortimer is an absolute darling and that Ziva knew to come see him there.
Loved the Soulmates reference. I thought that story was OK overall but it provides excellent fodder on Tony/Ziva in the long term.
I have to say that work, renos (yes it's still going on but the end is in sight, finally) and other interests have kept me too busy to have seen the last few eps of the season, but I think that these two will be dancing around one another for all eternity.
As always, an excellent job! :)
| LunaZola 5/2/10 . chapter 1
Genuis! Every little bit. And puppy therapy is always effective! That's how I convinced my Daddy to get me a puppy. So so good. I'm glad our little love birds worked it out. :D
| The Vampire's Liaison 5/1/10 . chapter 1
Really cute piece. I enjoyed it a lot. Especially the part about Tony lying on the floor with the puppy. Don't know why. Got a thing about cute men with cute dogs, I guess. Plus your pen name always makes me want to go listen to the song Michael Weatherly recorded, Bitter and Blue. Its pretty amazing, and he is a great singer, which I appreciate in a man. Sexy voice too. So much fun. I don't know who decided that NCIS needed to air three or more times per day, but that guy needs a raise, a cheesecake, many many hugs, and a really hot girlfriend.
| polarpi 4/9/10 . chapter 1
Meant to review earlier - hear you on the job stress (how many more days til evals are completed?)
Wanted to say that I LOVED this story, and agree of the cuteness of Mortimer - wish I had my own Morty around here :)
| Teresa 4/4/10 . chapter 1
GREAT job! I had several of those "AW!" moments while reading. I can't wait until they really talk about Somalia on the show. It's gonna be a DOOZY! :)
| cymraes 4/1/10 . chapter 1
| Fed up with this crap 3/31/10 . chapter 1
Very nice and I had completely forgot what the program was about other than Ducky's mom lol but you reminded me. Nicely written.
| Aquila1 3/27/10 . chapter 1
Hey, great to see you back again, though I suppose I'm a little late to the party :) Lovely work, as always. You added a lot of depth to an episode I hadn't really put a lot of though into. I especially loved the line "You never had to ask." Really powerful. I hope things at work have settled down a little.
| Viper003 3/23/10 . chapter 1
Cute, cute, cute! Great job )
| darkstarspanky 3/16/10 . chapter 1
I thought this was very cute! I was smiling to myself throughout the majority of the story, haha!