|Reviews for Tamers Requiem, Book 4: Revival|
| ShadowLDrago 10/26/12 . chapter 49
I was half expecting you to sign off like you did with book 3 you are now leaving the world of
Well onto the review. I loved this last part with Cherubimon dark digivolving into her (I think lopmon acts more like a girl then then a boy)
| ShadowLDrago 10/26/12 . chapter 46
Awesome! I always wanted to see Daemon SUper Ultimate in action. Thanks, awesome chappie, I love seeing Crimson mode and Beelzemon in action
| ShadowLDrago 10/25/12 . chapter 27
It seems that the effect the Dark Area had on Agumon's digivolution lasts.
| ShadowLDrago 10/25/12 . chapter 25
I see you gave Takato a partner in the form of BlackGuilmon who can mode change to Cloack mode.
| ShadowLDrago 10/25/12 . chapter 23
LOL! Suzie has style, I like! :P x... ah, hell 1000.
| ShadowLDrago 10/25/12 . chapter 22
Takato sticks his foot in his mouth so much, he should have sugery to remove his feet and hover so,ehow so that way there will be no feet to stick in his mouth. :P
| ShadowLDrago 10/25/12 . chapter 17
The Dark Ocean's dark data must really be messing with Marcus's DNA and as a result Agumon's digivolution by corrupting them
| ShadowLDrago 10/25/12 . chapter 14
Atsuo got what was coming to him! The Dark Ocean. In the words of many a Frenchman, Merde.
| ShadowLDrago 10/25/12 . chapter 10
LOL! I didn't know that Jeri could be so devilish! Or even Calumon whose naive mind set prevents him from knowing what you do and don't do. Jeri and Rika have gotten their fair share of embarresments!
| ShadowLDrago 10/24/12 . chapter 6
Racism. It makes my blood boil and the attitude of kids like Atsuo pushed me nearly to the limit. Granted I have a rather short fuse but I am more patient then I am given credit for. If I could give Atsuo a piece of my mind I would but I have 3 things holding me back. Hold on 4 1. If I did, I could do far more damage then just a piece of my mind. 2 common sense. 3 Self restraint and 4 he is an OC in a story. Albeit of a show wich I love but still. Fiction is fiction.
| ShadowLDrago 10/24/12 . chapter 4
SInce when is Wikipedia believeable? You knwo better then Me that nayone can log on and edit a page from scientific info to complete idiocy
| ShadowLDrago 10/24/12 . chapter 2
Marcus is here... Aw nuts, he is no Gogglehead in any way other then being the "leader" though that clashed with Thomas soemtimes and he has quite a short fuse, I wonder how SHineGreymon would Fare aginst this Gallantmon who can go Crimson mode, but then again SHineGreymon has his Burst mode, that would be a clash of titans
| ShadowLDrago 10/24/12 . chapter 1
I see things haven't changed a bit! Terriermon is still obnoxious, Lopmon is still silent, Guilmon is still hilariously naive and Renamon is still the ninja
| Bolo42 3/5/12 . chapter 2
Alway's did wonder what would happen if Marcus ended up meeting the Rika... Lol
| The other Guy 10/16/11 . chapter 49
It works! Well I'll be a monkey's wrench's uncle! I'm assuming this actually sends though, so who knows?
Moving passed my revelations, as limited as they may be, I want to take this chance to say this was an... interesting direction to take Requiem. You're including Next, something I don't think is often done and for good reason. Next itself wasn't bad per say, but it's story could have been a lot better. Add all the other universes to an already odd idea and I must appluad you. Never gonna catch me pulling this off.
So... Norn... the heck? Even Barbamon, somebody that is said to be able to drive pretty much anyone to his side, was unable to turn her/it to his side. Prometheus rewrites in what, three seconds if even? Just what is that guy? Makes Neos seem like a pansy and that's saying something. She also has command of another group of knights? Begs the question as to where they were when she was trying to kill everything or everything was trying to kill her. And I'm not talking about specific events, just all the times you see her. In fact my mind gets warped when you do things with Norn. For one, Marcus. Managed to detroy her armoured form and damages her core, yet her unarmoured self pwns his ass. With a very delibirate 'p' in there. Also, despite the fact she is very obviously being controlled, the knighthood of whateverness still follows her orders? When she wasn't being controlled she was betrayed multiple times by the Royal Knights, how does that work out?
But I am way more interested in the big P, that guy screws uo everything. He's judging humanities worth by picking on women? Also manages to turn a piece of GranDracmon to his side, rewrites the god of the digital world(that puts all his other rewriting crap to shame) and absorbs that mysterious ball of light? Whaaaa! But hey, whatever works for you. Now if only we knew what he worked towards maybe we could judge him. Oni was so much simplier. And I peferred him for some reason. More omph when he did something, plus he didn't seem like a cocky little bastard.
Since I'm on the topics of bad guys, I really want to take a quick pit stop off at Demon and Maelstorm. Demon I like. Other than the fact he makes super ultimate, something that no one else has managed without some heavy outside interference. Even Takato hasn't made that! Or Magnamon, and that guy is a walking miracle! Maybe this is me being stupid, but how did he pull that one off? Into the Maelstorm. Ah, really could have resisted that, but why would I want to? Anywho, whats the deal with that dragon? He's some how managed to become Yamaki's best friend? Also, despit having been seriously thrashed by Takato, he somhow stands up to Beelzemon with ease? That just doesn't role with me. Doesn't Beelzemon have the X-Antibody now? That means you can't actually die, and Beelzemon pretty much just did that righ there. Yeah, no one killed him, but he's hardly gonna be the same anymore. And looking at his convo with the slinker from the DA you gotta wonder just what GranDracmon had been doing.
Well Suzi's been having fun, but I can't say I feel the need to talk about that, other than to say there isn't much to say. You've gone through it and moved on. All I can really mention is that he seems to be using the seven sins in some kind of test for humanities worth in his/somethings final plan for the universe. Well maybe not final, but it'll be the end of the world as we know it. Cat's and dogs living together and all that.
Lumemon can't catch a break, but that doesn't suprise me. But here's a thing you miht want to explain, Prometheus wants him right? But Lumemon doesn't hold the Demon Lord version of Lucemon, only a dying child version. You stated earlier on in the series that the Demon Lord was locked up in the DA. So why would he be needed? He doesn't even have the hazard! Also wondering what happened to BlackGuilmon's attempts to get Takato back, since that kinda vanished about the same time as Takato died. For awhile I thought he was the mysterious Takato that was saving everyone, then you mentioned that he was the dead vrsion of Takato. Curious. Hey, does this means Takato is going to hell? That could be a nice twist right there.
The Tamers seem to be growing up, Suzie losing the R's was a good addition, but I'm wondering why they all seem to be falling for each other. Also why Rika isn't still hitting Jeri for giving up on Takato, I can't help but feel like you skipped a part or I missed something. Probably the later, I'll go back sometime and check. Also, what's the deals with Kazu? He's been acting wierd, but nobody seems to pick up on it and that's annoying me. And since when did Takato have trouble hitting a lady? Didn't he punch right through the J-Reaper? Not to mention that crazy spell he had to as that ChaosGallantmon. The only other thing I do want to point out in regards to the aners(that also sounds like the story isn't even focused on them) is your over use of Henry's red-rage. He goes crazy against every single big foe we meet!
The two main things for me now, Jeri(Not a real Tamer in my books) and Marcus(Thanks for including this guy)! Why Jeri? Well that two or three lines dealing with her eyes was kind of a highlight I thought, one that seemed to dull very quickly. You gonna get back to that, or is this more of a nod to the fact Milleniummon is till hanging around her? But what about Marcus? I was mega suprised whem he popped up, since Savers seems to conflict with your story in a big way. But hey, if your happy with ignoring somethings then I won't comment. Other than that last bit, but who reads this crap anyway? I must admit I still don't know who the hooded man they fought was, so if you could give me a clu that would help. Or is this not me missing something and you just haven't said?
I can't help but feel like I'm missing something here... Marcus: check. Tamer: checks. Bad guys: check. Hazard: Unsure, but gonna just say it got destroyed so I can say check again. What am I missing? Grani? Yeha, that'll do till I find something of worth. Where is he anyway, I thought that purple and fluffy found him? Speaking of that oddity again, what's up with him? He semed to have such power in the last book, and now he's a runt again.
Wait, there we go! The Dark Area! See this is why I hate to abbreviate things, I forget what it actually is and just see letters. What is up with that lovely resort? Sucks everyone in, mucks them up some, and still has those odd creaturs that are next to useless. Although, I do want to mention something about those slinkers, you say they captured Kari? I thought they called out to her since they were being screwed about with by the Digimon Emperor, and afterwards tried to talk her into staying because she was awesome? if that was an attempt at abduction then they need to learn what it means to be threatening.
Before we fade off, I have one last thing that I really should be ale to work out on my own. What killed off UlforceVeedramon?
And that's a wrap! For th record though, my first few attempts often asked about where the hell Marcus and Takato cloaked mode vanished off to, but now that we have book five set in my mind I think I'll simply point out that at the time it was very abrupt. Seemed like you dropped them like a sack of potatoes.