I honestly don't remember what's going on. Why Vent is suddenly in love with Mare. Where Kelsier is. It's been awhile.

I'm glad you're still continuing on with this story. Lovely chapter, so keen for more.

This is good. I only finiahee the trilogy this week, and ithas me goin. Write i command thee.

oooooooo more please I look forward to it -

ps I less then three the Mistborn Trilogy 3

I'm glad you still update. Looking forward to more.

Aw, that's kind of cute.

Why didn't you finish it?

ahhh goodness that was wonderful. you're great at staying in character too I'm loving the cocky carefree Kelsier I imagined he would have been before losing Mare.

Can't wait Sanderson's mistborn follow up series _

Oh, boy. I don't remember at all where Ruddy and Vent are mentioned. I haven't read Mistborn since July... Okay, that's a lame excuse.

I'm just going to ignore that (although I've made a proper mess of THAT by now) and say that I'm looking forward to the raid on House Elariel.

When they first try to see if Vin is a Mistborn compares her to Vent.

Ruddy is the smoker who went with Kell and Mare on their little night hiest into the Lord Ruler's palace. I don't seem to recall Vent from anywhere. I like you're character development, keep it up.

I don't like Rudeous. I REALLY don't like Rudeous. If he tries to force himself on Mare... !

This is a very well-written story that feels like it belongs in Sanderson's world. I do hope you plan to continue. How far are you thinking of writing?

Still like it. Although I thought Kelsier robbed Elariel for its atium after the pits? Also I was thinking Rudeous would have been a bit surprised about Mare, after all he was thinking she was just a common whore. Being a misting would have been enough to shock him as well as her being a member of Kelsier's crew.

Your doing a pretty good job on your story, keep writing and I'll keep reading.