aw...that was so fluffy and cute and kinda sad. *praise!*

Het Cardel!

You revwied my KH fic! Oh thank you! (Glomps you) I've reviewd this before, you knoe the unsigned person named JADE? that's me before i signefdup to ? Funny huh? I had no idea that you wrote this!

Ironicly this was the first Tekken yaoi type fic i read! Though not the first Yaoi fic i read FF7 did that for me! _ m...cloud and Sehpy... can't get enough!

Ack! Gotta go! Upadte soon!

Luva and hugs!

Jade xx

KEEP IT GOING carry this on cause it's good1 do new chapter for me please! i'll give u a cookie if u do!

short and sweet, but good

*wicked laughter* I like the last sentence. *laugh more* Anyway, I agree that dreams are always sorta disjointed like that, and nothing is very graphic. In that sense, I'd say that this is a well-captured thought process. But don't you hate it when you wake up from a good dream just to see your ceiling? *sighs* Link

The poem was very good. Your words gave a great picture of everything that was going on i felt like i was having the dream. It was great.

I only have one question. I thought jin and hwoarang dont like each other that kinda made the poem bad for me. that was kinda weird. please tell me wat you think of these comments

thanks